Friday, 26 July 2019

Summer

In Room 1 we have been doing descriptive writing. I enjoyed voice typing but I found describing the wind difficult. 


Outside, the refreshing warm beach was calm. Boiling soft sand glimmered in the sun. The cool breeze was still. As I ran in the house, I still heard the calm beach, saw the glimmering sand and felt the cool breeze blowing on my back. 

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  1. Mrs Naden31 July 2019 at 15:28

    Hi Isabelle,
    I liked how you described the sand using adjectives and juicy verbs. Maybe you could insert an image of the beach to your blog.
    Mā te wā,
    Mrs Naden

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